:: Idle Neurosis ::

:: Saturday, March 01, 2003 ::

this challenge was not
intended towards you naughti,
but since you went ahead and went there,
i do believe your rhyme is overrated and gaudy.

i could go on and on
say that facets of your scheme are copied and a bore,
but the fact of the matter
is that i do abhor
to this internal war.

i do not attack my fellow ladies,
we ought to work together to save the day,
but since you can't flow like the strum of a six-stringed guitar,
i guess we're not playin that way.

do not be jealous of my vocabulary,
and the fact that i DO NOT need to use a dictionary,
this creativeness comes straight from my brain
and my natural ability drives you incessantly insane.

you call yourself a minimalist
but you have this overblown sense of your own rawness,
your contortet mental images are amiss
leaving you to live in a world of ignorant bliss.

my my dear, your attempt was sad
it is something quite similar to a passing fashion trend, simply a fad.
and while this was quite an uncalled for attack
i do forgive and forget, and will forever have your back.
stellar lady:: Anonymous 7:57 PM [+] ::
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